Saturday, April 9, 2011

If Only.........!!

There's Something About Me I'd Like To Write About..
I Write Stories.. Well Maybe Unfinished Stories ( Yet I Hope.. :p ) Cuz I'm Just That Lazy.. But Don't Worry It's All There In The Back Of Mind..


So While Writing.. I Imagine The Character And Live The Whole Story.. So While That I Wrote A Poem Let's Say Kinda Poem .. This Girl In My Story Wrote For Someone.. Well No Need for Details cuz I Might Become A Famous Writer ( Who Know..?!!  Jk  ;P),  Anyway That's Not My Point Before I Write The Poem.. I Just Realized That Expressing Ur Feelings Is A Good Thing..


Common.. What's The Use Of Keeping Them Inside.. Express Them Even If There's No One Who Will Listen.. Or No One Who Would Care.. Express Them Even Though It's To0 Late.. cuz holding Them In For Far along will Only hurt You.. and might hurt Others To0..




Anyway Let's Go To This Girl's Sad Little words.. Hope you Like Them:





" IF ONLY YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I MISS YOU IN MY LIFE..
IF ONLY I KNOW YOU STILL CARE..!


IF ONLY YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES A DAY I THINK ABOUT YOU..
IF ONLY I KNOW AM I STILL ON YOUR MIND..?!


IF ONLY YOU KNOW HOW MUCH YOU HURT ME WHEN YOU LEFT..
IF ONLY I KNOW THE REASONS WHY YOU LEFT..!


IF ONLY YOU KNOW THE TEARS THAT FELL EACH TIME I READ YOUR MESSAGES..
IF ONLY I KNOW WHAT BETWEEN US WENT WRONG..?!


IF ONLY YOU KNEW HOW MUCH I LOVED YOU..
IF ONLY I KNOW IF YOU CARED ABOUT ME BEFORE..?!


IF ONLY I KNEW LOTS OF THINGS.. BUT NOW I ASK MYSELF:
IF ONLY I KNOW SHOULD I HOLD ON OR LET GO..?! "


DONE..


By Bero0.Q8


Hope you Like It..


P.s: ( My Imagination Is Wide As I Live It :D )

10 comments:

  1. If only i'm not so hungry right now.

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  2. @kuwaitiful if only u know how I wish u go and eat :p

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  3. @yathof thanks a lot glad u passed by ;)

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  4. fantastic, very emotional, very conveying

    im also a bit of a poet, i wrote this:
    http://kuwaitexposed.wordpress.com/2010/04/30/confession-40-matters-of-the-heart/

    (btw the answer to that last question of mine is yes)

    btw, i love how we both ended with almost the same question :)

    bit of constructive criticism:
    1) lose the caps :)
    2) If only you know, if only I knew

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  5. Loveeeeeee it!!!!!! kila et3abreeeeeeeeeen ib ashya' ana a7es feha!!@@

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  6. @LorD AymZ : Thanks Alot.. I LOved Your Lines To0 So Full Of Emotions..
    And Thanks For The criticism It's Gonna Help Me Next Time.. :D

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  7. @Gold Medal Ribbon: Glad U Loved It.. :****
    I told You We Are Twins heheeh Twins never met :P

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